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Only Half- Cabal's dam is a full blooded vampire with lineage dating all the way back to Nosferatu, his sire, now a converted vampire was human when Cabal was concieved. That puts him on the edges of two societies who don't want him, the broods would kill him, the humans fear him. The situation is only made worse when the bombs fall, creating a world where there is no trust, no law, and certainly no love for differences.

After years of traveling the desert with Carmen, his mother, Cabal finds that she has finally snapped. She transfers blame for the bad in her life to him, and in turn attacks him intent to suck him dry. Will he be able to convince her that he is not at fault? What if he can't? Well read and find out!

Also updated is Gemutations: Plague-
Gemues (Mutants for the uninitiated) are rife throughout New Fresno, everyone knows it and most tolerate the diversity. It is an easy existence by no means for those who traded their humanity to survive what was thought to be the drowning of the Earth.
When gemues appear that can spread their mutation, and kill their victims in the process, things threaten to become a lot more ugly for the latest group being discriminated against. It is up to Tigershark and Angelina (Both Gemues themselves) with the help of the doctor Tom Martin and his brother, a former sheriff, to put a stop to both the virus and the rising hostility between gemues and humans.

Our mystery villian is revealed, as Cortez tracks down the creator of the contagious gemues. His intent...to form an alliance, so long as it suits him, to find out the scientists secrets and then to turn the cad over to the authorities.

If you have not read them before, please stop in...take a look...and for heavens sake leave me a review! I live for them, and I also like to learn from others...so please help me out, tell me why it is good or bad, and what you see as things to improve on!

to get there just follow this link: www.fictionpress.com/~darwin

Thanks and happy reading! BTW both of these stories are rated "R" for Language, Violence, and some Sexual Situations.

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OK just consolidating here!

"Only Half" chapter 11 is up! Check it out and let me know what you think!


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Here's one more that is already up.

Hello again!

WEll in the tradition of Christmas I have written a one shot for Steve and Maribel (From Starting Over and throughout Gemutations: Plague) and their first Christmas as a couple. It came out of me rather fast so if it is a bit rough please let me know!

It it called, so unoriginally "First Christmas"

Give it a read if you read nothing else of mine...and let me know what you think!

thanks!


BTW the response was overwhelming there will be an addendum to First Christmas called "Christmas Night" and I hope to have it ready to post by tomorrow! I promised Nynaeve that I would have it to her by New Years.

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Yay & hooray! I can't wait for "Christmas Night"! grin grin grin
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It is about done...kinda sorta...Steve's pulling a fast on on his brother...
I just have to get some cohesive meaning for the chapter itself.

LOL! Getting there! I promise!

Later~You know what...you are hard to write! LOL!

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Me? Hard to write???? No way! I'm too silly to be difficult! lol
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Snicker...Well it's not the personality I am having a problems with (You currently have Tom barred from his own kitchen)...

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Jeez, I'm mean!
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Snicker...Well it's not the personality I am having a problems with (You currently have Tom barred from his own kitchen)...



surprised *falls over laughing* Oh, now I totally can't wait to read this!

~ TnR

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surprised *falls over laughing* Oh, now I totally can't wait to read this!

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Me, either! (the funny thing is, I did that to the hubby over Thanksgiving...he does most of the cooking at our house, but I do the holiday meals. He says it's because I'm trying to trick everyone into thinking I'm domestic! lol)
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LMAO! Oh well I am so glad I could hit the nail on the head for that! It is pretty funny. Making poor Tom feel like a fifth wheel!

LOL!

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YAY Sarah I have the next chapter of First Christmas done! Visit my profile for Christmas Night!

Later!

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Awww, I just read it and it's so cute! smile
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YEAH A new one from me!

"Trapped in Darkness"

This is technically a one shot not an ongoing story. But there will be two chapters because eight pages for one chapter is already long, and 16 would be huge!

This is a filler story I guess you could say about Steve Martin and the events immediately following his escape from Takahira's torture in Hong Kong. This was all touched on in Starting Over, but if you haven't read it there is enough background in Trapped that you will understand what is going on.

Go read it and let me know....PLEASE???

THanks!

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Good stuff!
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Go read it and let me know....PLEASE???

THanks!


Done and done! Good stuff! smile

~ TnR

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Go read it and let me know....PLEASE???

THanks!


Yes Ma'am! smile
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Excellent job Darwin!
Though most of us know what is to become of the hottie, Steve. It's still good to read more about him.

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Hey Thanks you guys! You're awesome!

I found some corrections to make in it today...BLEH! Oh well...in work on the second half, I wouldn't expect it much before about Thursday though! It's not like I have a day off this time to type it! LOL!

for those who have yet to make it over there....would begging help?bawling

No? Crap!

Later all!


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Second Chappie of Trapped is up! It is called A Candle in the Eternal Darkness...

I'm afraid that there will be another chapter after all...as it says at the end of the chapter I seriously underestimated what I wanted to talk about on this particular story!

Thanks!

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