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In Your Honor, Chapter Three Scene Two was entered by Ten no Ryu on 0404-1313-07070707 at 20:29 Hours and was read 1283 times. |
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Description: Well, FP.com is still broken and I can't upload anything there. I didn't want to start uploading this story here, because heck, you guys have all seen it before. Multiple times. Even this scene isn't new. It has been revamped, though, to fit the themes that I've been retrofitting into the story. I thought I'd post this up here and ask for a little editing help before I upload it to FP.com. I don't mind if you haven't read the story before - and I'm not asking anyone to hurt themselves trying to point out mistakes. All I ask is that if you see something you know is wrong, let me know. Or, something that makes zero sense. Or I contradict myself. That kind of thing. And thanks! I really love reviews (and I want them on FP.com, simply because they look nice in the stats). But hey, I think this new database is pretty darn cool. And thus, my first contribution! Oh yeah, guess I should say something about the chapter. Ummm . . . Leah is insane and Kiryn is a whiner. The end. heehee ~ TnR To the Support-Thread |
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